Ear 1 C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read P: The purpose was to inform the reader of the options they have in college A: The audience is to freshman students coming to college G: Brochure E: To help students with their transition to college C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read P: The purpose was to inform the reader of a better healthier lifestyle to have in college A: The audience is to all different kinds of students in need G: Brochure E: To help students maintain a healthier lifestyle in college C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read P: The purpose was to inform the reader of some tips to help them A: The audience is to students that need tips for college G: Brochure E: To help students with academic tips for college success
Reflection: I decided to do a brochure because my examples were brochures.
Before I did a powerpoint and after the peer review I got advice that doing a brochure would make it seem more professional. C: The black wording on the white background make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold headings and the repetitive tips given A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read P: The purpose was to inform the reader about college drinking A: The audience is to all students since I'm giving tips to help G: Brochure E: To help students with their binge drinking
Ear 2 C: The images make this stand out because the rest of the paper is in black and white R: The repetition is the bold wording A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read P: The purpose was to inform students about the book store A: The audience is to students G: Flyer E: To help students with their book needs C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words but it's a little hard to read P: The purpose is to help students with their health A: The audience is to freshman students coming to college G: A page in a booklet E: To help students with their health C: The images make the brochure stand out R: The repetition is the huge image on each page A: it's aligned P: I think the words are too hard to read P: The purpose was to inform the reader about study abroad A: The audience is to college students G: Brochure E: To show students options about study abroad
C: The coloring of the words makes it pop on the page R: The repetition is the bold wording A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words P: The purpose is to make people laugh in rough situations A: The audience is to people who need to keep calm G: A flyer/poster E: To help students C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words P: The purpose is to show side effects of drinking A: The audience is to college students and maybe people passing by G: A parody crosswalk sign E: To show what students really do
Reflection: In this satire I feel as if the concept of it wasn't too clear but I think I did a good job making it obvious that it was a satire C: The bold red makes the purpose of it stand out R: The repetition is the bold wording A: it's aligned P: I think there's good spacing between words P: The purpose is to parody people who don't believe in drinking A: The audience is to students coming to college G: A flyer E: To transform students from drinkers to scholars
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read
P: The purpose was to inform the reader of the options they have in college
A: The audience is to freshman students coming to college
G: Brochure
E: To help students with their transition to college
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read
P: The purpose was to inform the reader of a better healthier lifestyle to have in college
A: The audience is to all different kinds of students in need
G: Brochure
E: To help students maintain a healthier lifestyle in college
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording and each images on the pages
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read
P: The purpose was to inform the reader of some tips to help them
A: The audience is to students that need tips for college
G: Brochure
E: To help students with academic tips for college success
Reflection: I decided to do a brochure because my examples were brochures.
Before I did a powerpoint and after the peer review I got advice that doing a brochure would make it seem more professional.
C: The black wording on the white background make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold headings and the repetitive tips given
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read
P: The purpose was to inform the reader about college drinking
A: The audience is to all students since I'm giving tips to help
G: Brochure
E: To help students with their binge drinking
Ear 2
C: The images make this stand out because the rest of the paper is in black and white
R: The repetition is the bold wording
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words so that it's easier to read
P: The purpose was to inform students about the book store
A: The audience is to students
G: Flyer
E: To help students with their book needs
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words but it's a little hard to read
P: The purpose is to help students with their health
A: The audience is to freshman students coming to college
G: A page in a booklet
E: To help students with their health
C: The images make the brochure stand out
R: The repetition is the huge image on each page
A: it's aligned
P: I think the words are too hard to read
P: The purpose was to inform the reader about study abroad
A: The audience is to college students
G: Brochure
E: To show students options about study abroad
Reflection: I decided to do a flyer pertaining to health on campus.
I feel as if this flyer is very professional looking and my peer review person liked that I didn't use a cliché logo and used the heart vegetable and fruit logo.
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording and the place where to go
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words
P: The purpose is to help students with their health
A: The audience is to freshman students coming to college
G: Flyer
E: To help students with their health in college
Ear 4
C: The coloring of the word "Teamwork" makes it stand out
R: There isn't really repition
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between letters of "teamwork"
P: The purpose is to help students with drinking
A: The audience is to students from highschool to college
G: A Flyer
E: To help students with drinking
C: The coloring of the words makes it pop on the page
R: The repetition is the bold wording
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words
P: The purpose is to make people laugh in rough situations
A: The audience is to people who need to keep calm
G: A flyer/poster
E: To help students
C: The coloring of the words and images make it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words
P: The purpose is to show side effects of drinking
A: The audience is to college students and maybe people passing by
G: A parody crosswalk sign
E: To show what students really do
Reflection: In this satire I feel as if the concept of it wasn't too clear but I think I did a good job making it obvious that it was a satire
C: The bold red makes the purpose of it stand out
R: The repetition is the bold wording
A: it's aligned
P: I think there's good spacing between words
P: The purpose is to parody people who don't believe in drinking
A: The audience is to students coming to college
G: A flyer
E: To transform students from drinkers to scholars